My Tour:I really liked the way me tour ended up. My tour reflects a dream of my own, go kiteboarding to the best beaches on the world, such as Cozumel in Mexico, Tarifa in Spain and a lot of other places in Brazil, South Africa and Dominican Republic. I notice also that my tour, and some more not the majority had an automatic way of moving from a spot to another spot. What I mean is that everybody use the mouse and other tools to adjust the location of the tour; however I "Pin" my locations and with a click the software automatically went to the locations. It just make it look more professional. Another thing that make it look more professional was that with each "Pin" it had a mini explanation of why I choose that place or any important information. What I could have changed was the spelling and gramatical errors on my explanations of each location and maybe have put a little more detail in the "Zooms".
Pedro Pablo's Tour: The tour of Pedro Pablo was similar to mine, It was about kiteboarding. The tour of Pedro Pablo was well done, contain everything that was expected from us by the teacher and you can see a little bit of extra effort. I also liked that it was a more simple tour of places to kiteboard; where as mine was to extravagant and really expensive. Pedro Pablo could have corrected simple stuff that would have make his tour better. For example, I will recommend him to use "Pins" at a 100% what they can do. What I mean is that he indeed use them, however he didn't "click" on them, so they were just marks in a map. Also he moved by location to location with the mouse, which made it look really sloppy. For the same reason I encourage him to use the "Pins" correctly.
Debora's Tour: I was really amazed by the tour of Debora. To be honest, it was very well done. I liked that she use the "Pin" trick but what I really liked was that the images were really detail (very organized, and correct zoom so they would look nice and not all full of megapixels). The only thing I didn't like, which is really minimum was that she had the explanations of her tour on the Pins, instead of having a brief description in a "pop-up". This was the only thing, she did a great job.
Paco Carmona